Editing

In this version the days are split up by subtitles with dates to show a passing of time. I'm not sure this works very well and it adds length to the film. I would have chosen to do the names of days 'Monday' 'Tuesday' etc. as in Flight of the Conchords. Again the montage is at the end of the film as a kind of summary of the relationship from day one- where the characters start standing apart, and get closer as the days go on.